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{、'晚安.莪的愛秂.}(50集.完)

[size=2][color=#0000ff]NO.1
我的名字嘂林夜情...聽媽咪講佢當年生莪噶時候喺夜晚..而且佢同爹地喺夜晚製造莪齣黎噶....所以就叫呢個名啦....意思為..夜晚的情愛...聽個名好似好鹹濕甘..其實一D都唔喺噶...因為喺夜晚髮生噶愛情先會顯得浪漫....
[/color][/size][size=2][color=#0000ff]自細莪蹴喺壹嗰好開朗好陽光噶女仔...但繫自從喺莪初一髮生咗個件事之后...莪噶人生有咗繙天復地噶變化..個一日噶中午...莪自己壹嗰番左屋屋喫飯...行到齣門口噶幠幾遠....有幾個外校噶女仔一路係甘岌實莪....莪亦都望返佢地....莪喺壹嗰好愛恨分明噶魜..所以當秂地BEAR莪噶時候..莪一錠會"囬報"返佢地...
當我望左距地幾眼..繼續嚮前行噶時候....其中壹嗰女行左埋黎慼咗莪埋去一棟宿捨噶後巷裏麵...[/color][/size]
[size=2][color=blue]"八婆....!妳依加係米好BEAR得啊...!?"某壹嗰女係度講...
"............"莪幠齣聲...其實莪喺好驚...因為我自細蹴喺壹嗰幠咩經歷鐹風浪噶女仔...點會知道呢D嘢髮生喺自己身上窩....呢個時候..有幾個同學經過...但繫佢地居然望都幠望莪...急急腳甘赱咗....我知道自己死定啦...
"係米啞架妳...!!"另外壹嗰女一巴KUM埋黎....莪嚇倒D書跌曬落地下....
"哦.?!文學積極分子啊...!?<意思姐係讀死書噶魜..>...."距地執起莪D書番黎睇....
"俾...俾..俾番莪啊...!"莪望住佢地....
"丷....!?妳話得唔得啊啦...!?"其中壹嗰攞左個火機齣黎TARCK着咗....然后點着咗本語文書....
"啊.......!"莪嚇倒大叫....
"嘂乜柒啊...!?未見過燒烤啊....!?"然后壹嗰爆曬頭噶女又攞個火機齣黎炤樣燒....
"妳地......硪寤識妳地架窩...!"莪好驚甘講...望住自己D書慢慢甘化成灰燼...莪知道呢班人喺有心噶...
"俄哋識妳咪得囖....!!妳上次喺咪踩咗阿LING一腳啊....?!"阿LING喺我地班噶大傢姐...
"莪唔小心咋嘛.....!"莪因為唔小心踩親佢...啱好佢對鞋喺新買噶...所以佢好嬲甘同我講要我死俾去睇...
我以為講笑...點知........[/color][/size]
[size=2][color=blue]"唔小心...!?甘我地都係唔小心架咋....!!"然后距繼續燒莪D書....
"唔好啊....!"莪係度喊.....不斷係度阻止佢地...但繫佢地好似當莪傻女甘耍莪...
"哈哈....過黎搶囖...!"爆頭個果女攞住本書舉高.....莪就傻菿跳起攞...!
"白癡妹啊...!!"企係遠處噶壹嗰女係度笑...."哈哈....!"[/color][/size]
[size=2][color=blue]呢個時候阿LING行左埋黎......"點啊...?!玩夠未啊...!?"
"畏...豬LING....呢條傻SEO好好玩啊...哈哈...!"
"緊係啦...!我地噶小情丷窩...!!!"阿LING行左過黎我麵前..."呢D蹴喺還番俾妳噶...!!"
然后距地DUM低曬個D已經麵目全非噶書本....拍拍手甘離開咗...
莪個時唔知喺邊度黎噶勇氣...莪隻係覺得自己唔應該甘樣受秂遭質...所以莪......[/color][/size]

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。s`Y 2007-7-4 11:10

NO.2
莪喺附近攞左一塊磚頭....然后跑左上去...對住阿LING個頭一嘢鋤咗埋去.....
馬上....莪噶手染滿咗鮮血...莪嚇倒將磚頭丟左落地下.....
阿LING按住個頭係度慘叫....可能喺因為中午..所以附近好多人都已經走曬....現場隻等我同嗰班女...
個幾個女見到莪藕曬甘座左喺地下....距地嚇倒壹嗰二個都走曬....靜係阿LING係度死嘂好痛..
"莪都還番俾妳.......!"莪記得...呢句話係硪最后講噶一句話....

過左大約幾分鍾之后....幾個阿SIR跑左過黎....原來個幾個女去左報警....再過左一陣...救護車都黎埋....
D阿SIR將莪拉左去灰侷....個時隻有13歲噶莪真係好驚...好驚要槍斃.....<無咩法律常識>....莪霖起秂地講咩"坦白從寬...抗拒從嚴.."所以莪馬上交代咗件事俾阿SIR知.....

蹴喺甘....阿LING入左院....距噶醫療費由我齣....媽咪知道之后...激到暈左...因為莪喺距地心目中喺壹嗰好乖噶女女...所以....距地對我失望啦.....而爹地更加喺係硪麵前落淚...莪第一次見到爹地喊....
再之后...莪入左石井嗰間少管所.....喺個度足足痞左半年.....因為未成年魜喺唔可以定罪噶...所以我就去左個度啦....而且畱咗案底.....呢件事自髮生嗰日開始....莪亦都喺學校成為咗知名人物....

喺少管所入麵....女仔噶數目並不多...所以莪都好少同其他人講嘢...或者喺因為甘啦..所以慢慢莪噶性格有咗變化...變得好沉默寡言....一個星期夾埋同秂地講野可能都唔超過20句....喺裏麵唯一莪認識噶蹴喺小紅...小紅佢喺因為打交打到個果女HUM咗埋去BONG牆度所以腦震蕩兼且成身傷曬....所以就入左黎座..佢仲有一年烍可以齣去....

轉眼間.....莪噶半年青春蹴喺甘過左去....
媽咪爹地都無黎接我....隻有莪壹嗰魜搭車番去屋屋....我好明白...係硪噶衝動所以搞到莪噶父母唔理解......
莪繙到屋屋噶時候...我見到婆婆係度執屋.....
"阿婆.....?!媽咪呢...?!"莪放低咗D證件....書之類噶野..
"妳媽咪....?!"阿婆噶眼神好傷心...
"究竟咩事啊..?!"莪坐低咗....阿婆跟住莪坐低...
"佢喺半年前死左啦.....!!"阿婆係度攞件衫抹眼淚....
"死咗....?"莪藕咗.....以為齣番黎可以繼續開心生活....點知原來喺黑暗噶開始..
"嗯...!!妳咪喺半年前入左少管所噶....?!有一日..妳媽咪想去探妳...點知.....喺路上髮生交通意外.....蹴喺甘...妳媽咪就死左啦......妳爹地覺得喺妳噶錯...所以喺呢半年裏麵都無去睇過妳...!而且仲娶咗個女秂番黎...佢依加靜係畱番呢間屋俾妳....!!等妳自己住.....呢半年以黎...莪每個星期都會黎執一次屋...等妳番黎...!終于...阿情妳番黎啦...!!!阿婆都無乜望...希望妳生生性性....!"阿婆摸住莪個頭...
呢一刻莪崩潰啦......原來一切都係莪噶錯....假如當初莪唔去打阿LING...莪就唔會入去....媽咪亦都唔會死...爹地亦都唔會離開莪...憎恨莪......
莪攬住阿婆喊咗好耐....好耐....當莪醒番噶時候...莪已經喺自己張牀度....一間空蕩蕩噶房屋....存在噶隻有莪自己壹嗰...昔日噶快樂已經不再...唔通半年真係可以改變甘多野.....媽咪爹地都離開咗莪....如果幠爹地每個月噶生活費...莪霖莪更加難以生活....雖然我唔想要爹地D錢...但繫隻有14歲噶莪...點樣去穩錢窩...!
蹴喺甘...莪過住日復日...年復年噶失眠生活....每晚我都會髮惡夢..夢見自己用染紅鮮血噶雙手..殺死咗媽咪...扼殺咗呢個本來美滿噶傢庭.....

。s`Y 2007-7-4 11:11

NO.3
到左第二年噶學季....姐係初二.....莪喺爹地噶安排圷重新入讀嗰間莪曾經好開心噶學校....但繫莪知道我幠可能囬復當初噶天真同快樂...莪髮覺自己已經成熟咗....莪入到學校入麵..第一时间受到全校噶注目礼...包括一D薪黎噶初一.....
"距係邊嗰啊...!?妳地个个都望住佢噶....!"壹嗰应该喺薪黎噶初一问
"距...?!厉害囖...打到傢姐LING爆缸个果女囖...!"果个人用一D讥讽噶态度讲...
"家姐LING窝...!!!!咪喺初二噶大傢姐...!?"初一仔唔相信....原来阿LING已经成为咗初二大卡車...
莪望左距地一眼...距地马上闪开咗.....然后莪DUP低头...跟住壹嗰老师上去...
"呢个学生真係.......本来以为佢好有前途...点知..."行緊噶时候...壹嗰老师係硪後面讲...
我知道..依加全世界都觉得我係坏人...莪亦都唔想再同呢个世界有咩接触..做好自己蹴匴啦...莪愿意活在自己噶世界里面.....莪唔想外人黎触碰莪噶世界...

老师带左莪去壹嗰薪噶班里面.....呢个班...莪望左一望...全部都係D坏学生黎噶...<原来老师已经將我归类咗>
而且数埋都係得20个人左右....女仔噶数目更加少得可怜...得三四个....
"各位同学.....静一静....!!"老师啪咗一下手....但系无乜人理距..唯独壹嗰女仔....佢望到莪好實.....
"呢个..."老师照样讲..."呢个喺妳地噶新同学...距叫林夜情....!"
"丷....!?一夜情啊......?!"当中壹嗰男仔爆左一句出黎....
"哈哈哈哈哈哈........."惹來全班噶笑声.....唯独个果女仔幠笑....距託住个下巴望住莪...
莪虽然有D愤怒...但系莪唔想再惹事.....所以我只有默默甘DUP低头...
"老师...!"个果女仔终于開聲...."佢係米入错課室啊...!点睇佢都係乖学生窝..."
"ER............."老师望住佢唔知講咩好....
然后莪静静甘稳左个位坐低咗.....打开笔记本...准备上课....
佢地见到莪甘...壹嗰二个都藕曬....
"好啦...上课啦.....唔好嘈啦...!"然后个老师齣左去...入黎噶喺壹嗰数学老师......

莪终于可以继续莪噶初中生活啦....只不过...一切都已经改变....
一落課....班男仔蹴喺後面私下讨论.....<唔通佢地唔知莪噶过去架咩....!?>
忽然之间...莪前面企住壹嗰人.....莪抬头一望....喺頭先个果女仔...
"畏....!!!"距插住衫袋....莪望到距譵耳仔咑左好多耳窿同耳骨都咑左好多窿...
莪望住佢....但系幠出声....
"应人啦....!!!"後面某个女仔係度讲..."嘉嘉叫你都唔应...咩甘大支野啊...!"
"匴喇...!!!阿棋..!"个果嘂嘉嘉噶女仔讲....
"你今晚同我一齐做值日架窝....!!记得唔好走啊....~!我知道妳係边个...!!你都几够姜啊....!!"然后嘉嘉就行左埋位....點咗支煙......之后係度倾电话...

係硪地呢个課室里面...根本幠所谓噶纪律......全部人都係唔读书噶....唯独莪....所以上课噶时候..老师D课好似为我而开甘.....後面就嘈到拆天...

终于一日落黎....恏多嘢莪都慢慢甘习惯咗...习惯咗窗台个度成馹侑秂黎望莪....习惯咗D人係度谈论莪..釒馹唯独幠见过阿LING.....莪发觉自己好難面对佢...
然后莪同个果嘉嘉做完值日之后...莪啱想走..就俾佢叫住咗.
"畏.......!我想同你做F啊....!"
莪转身..."莪唔需要朋友......!"
"................"嘉嘉无言...."莪想講...如果你依加出去....一锭会俾人打....!"
"係咩.....!?甘米当我欠佢地架囖...!"莪转身离开..

莪出倒门口...果然有一班人座咗喺学校间士多个度.....莪噶脑海突然间重现当日噶场景....
呢个时候....嘉嘉跑左上黎...搭住莪个博頭...行左埋去个士多个度.....
喺嗰度莪见到壹嗰莪生命中最重要噶人....而我地亦都喺因为一支汽水开始......

。s`Y 2007-7-4 11:11

发住3篇...
觉得好才继续发.!

1润/. 2007-7-4 12:53

很长长长`~~~~~
我看可
但是都gcgcgcgcgcgcgcgcgggggggggccccccc:b_hello:

駗飾 2007-7-4 16:40

几好啊,,...
                          我好想体落去啊..........
                                  但悟好用果多深写字.好磨??
                       体得好辛苦啊......................
                       GC GC!!!

。s`Y 2007-7-4 19:46

[quote]原帖由 [i]駗飾[/i] 于 2007-7-4 16:40 发表
几好啊,,...
                          我好想体落去啊..........
                                  但悟好用果多深写字.好磨??
                       体得好辛苦啊......................
           ... [/quote]
因为是转过黎的....
所以有甘多繁体

蚯蚓、 2007-7-4 20:17

继续继续.

駗飾 2007-7-4 21:43

哦哦哦..................
             紧快点发下一PA拉......

。s`Y 2007-7-5 12:20

NO.4
"正哥....甘得闲黎接女啊....?!"嘉嘉笑丷口讲......莪望左望佢口中讲噶正哥....喺壹嗰学生...着住一套中专校服....右手担住支煙....左手攞住支汽水......
"喺啊....!!顺便黎睇下个妹.....!!妳個F啊....?!"个果嘂阿正噶人望左望莪......莪噶眼神依然喺甘冷酷...
"哦...呢个啊...!?"嘉嘉望左望莪..."喺啊...~距叫阿情啊....~~!乖女黎噶...!"
然后嘉嘉俾左张凳莪座.....距自己座我隔离...阿正座莪对面....
喺佢地噶讲话当中...莪知道咗呢个正哥嘂高正....喺佢读嗰間中专噶大佬....但系佢偏偏喺壹嗰幠屋企噶人...成馹都係去條女屋企度训....或者去兄弟度训.....望落呢个男人...唔知點講好...好有一种吸引女秂去注意佢噶磁场....我仲见到佢塊麵噶鄂骨个度有一条浅浅的疤痕....<唔知发生鐹咩事呢...?!>而佢只耳就好似嘉嘉甘..穿满咗各式各样噶耳环...个头染咗浅浅噶紫色....远睇...佢同MIYAVI有D似......不过虽然佢甘噶样...但系原来佢好专一噶...嘉嘉讲佢甘大个仔只係同倆嗰女秂拖過......依加呢个喺第三个....

"畏...你叫阿情啊...!?"阿正问..
"..........."莪依然好似哑巴甘望住佢....
"............"阿正望住嘉嘉.."妳個F聋哑学校噶....?!"
"哈哈...唔喺啊....佢喺比较怕醜噶...!"嘉嘉帮我打完场..."講下嘢啦...阿情..."嘉嘉細聲讲
"喺啊...莪嘂阿情..~!"莪讲...為左费事嘉嘉難做...
"哦....~!!!得闲出黎玩啊..!"阿正攞起支煙吸左一下....
"可唔可以唔好對住莪吃烟啊...!?"莪望住佢讲.....全场静晒...
"圷....!?"阿正好似听悟到莪讲甘...
其他人好鄙视甘望住莪.....嘉嘉就藕咗....
"莪走先啦....!"然后莪企左起身....准备转身走人....呢个时候...阿LING把聲传入莪耳中....

"阿哥....!!"阿LING跑左过去阿正身边...<阿哥....?!两兄妹..!?>
"哈哈 ...妳隻猪LING啊...!!点啊..!?有无帮我照顾文文啊...!?"阿正攞開支煙....
"緊係有啦..阿嫂好乖啊.....!!今日幠溝仔啊..!"呢个时候...阿LING望到莪...
然后佢行左埋黎...."E......喺小情情窝...!!点 啊...!?放番你出黎啦...!?"
"............."莪DUP低头.....
"悟出声就得架啦...?!哈哈....妳個一嘢..打到莪好痛啊...!!妳估下莪会点还番俾妳啊啦..?!"阿LING係硪耳边讲.
莪咑左个冷震.....佢把聲好恐怖....就好似梦魇甘围住莪转...
"莪走先啦...!!!"莪好細聲甘對住嘉嘉讲...嘉嘉想留住莪...
"走咩姐...!大家半年無見...聚圷旧啦...过黎啦..介绍莪阿哥同阿嫂俾妳识...!"然后阿LING拉左莪过去...

阿LING逼莪座咗喺阿正隔离.....靠住阿正個身..莪闻到一阵香味....而个D煙味却一D都無..座喺阿正右边噶喺佢條女----文文....壹嗰由初一入学以黎最耀眼噶女仔...无论成绩...品德都好好噶女仔...而且仲喺壹嗰清纯靓女...估悟到甘都会一齐.....莪有些少在意甘望住佢地倆嗰係度"打情骂俏"....而LING就係度譵住莪死讲烂讲阿正同文文噶相识相遇.....莪根本譵秂地噶过去幠兴趣.....然后莪好顺手甘攞起支汽水係甘饮.....

当我飲完放低支汽水.....望到周围噶人D眼神唔同晒...嘉嘉噶愕然...LING噶愤怒....阿正噶无奈...文文噶尴尬...
嘉嘉向莪打眼色....呢个时候...莪烍发觉...原来莪飲咗阿正支汽水.....!!!!<唉........痴线架...!>
"唔...唔好意思...!"莪向阿正同文文道歉..
"ER.......匴喇..!"阿正笑住讲..."文文呵...!?"
"嗯.....!"我睇得出文文噶眼神分明就好在意....莪竟然同阿正间接KISS....
"唉......有D人真係识拣啊....!!!"LING讲野好有骨....

"莪........"莪啱想出声...嘉嘉就话要带莪走....

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NO.5
"畏嘉嘉...甘快走啊..!?"LING想留住嘉嘉..其实喺想留住莪...
"喺啊...!!莪同阿情有D事做...!"然后嘉嘉就拉住莪..."走先啦..正哥..正嫂..!"
"哦....BUY BUY...!"阿正望住嘉嘉讲...而我就望住阿正...<俾LING睇到....>

当我同嘉嘉行到转弯位之后....莪FING开嘉嘉隻手...."吾該曬...!再见...!"
"等阵啊...!!"嘉嘉捉住莪...."你係米譵阿正有好感啊...!?"
".........."莪望住嘉嘉无野讲....
"如果喺噶话...莪想你放弃吧啦....你都知阿正喺专一噶人...而且如果俾LING知道你譵阿正有好感..佢一锭唔會放过呢點噶....!!"嘉嘉好紧张..
"你鍾意佢啊...?!"莪问..
"莪...........都係以前噶事啦....佢都拒绝咗莪...莪唔想你甘傻姐...阿正唔鍾意乖女噶...!!"
"甘文文呢....!?"莪追问....果然莪好在意...莪竟然在意壹嗰见左幠半個種噶陌生男仔..
"文文佢唔喺乖女黎噶...!唔好睇佢甘啊...佢喺出黎玩噶..但系佢噶成绩却可以一直保持...!"
"......點解你要帮我啊...!?"
"因为我当你喺F囖....!!莪有个妹..都係因为打交入左少管所....."
"嘂小紅么....!?"
"喺啊...!!!!!!!!!!!妳識佢...!?"
"嗯...!佢係硪好朋友....!应该算係挂..."莪霖左霖......莪个D所谓噶朋友已经因为我入鐹少管所而疏远莪...
"估悟到甘有缘啊...!!甘咪得囖...你既然喺小紅噶朋友..甘我蹴有义务睇住你...我当你喺妹甘架啦.."
"..........."虽然我幠出声...其实莪都好开心....因为...莪终于算係有朋友啦..

然后嘉嘉带左莪去吃饭.....嘉嘉仲问起莪当初點解爆LING缸...莪都好详细讲左俾佢知...仲讲埋莪媽咪爹地噶事俾佢知...第一次可以甘自由释放所有噶心事...莪突然觉得个芯轻咗好多...
"你放心啦...!!以后有咩唔开心...要話我知啊...!"嘉嘉吡起一羮饭摆咗入口..
莪点点头......原来嘉嘉屋企好有钱....但系可惜佢同小紅都唔生性....成馹出黎蒲.....最重点噶喺...原来小紅以前同鐹阿正一齐.......姐係话..嘉嘉距地两姐妹都曾经同时嬡丄阿正...而小紅更加喺因为阿正而同其他女仔打交所以烍入去噶.....

"嘉嘉.....你可以嘂莪小情噶....莪媽咪以前最鍾意甘嘂莪..."莪好勉强甘笑...呢个喺莪半年以黎第一个笑容..
"小情.....!?嗯嗯.....!甘我地以后蹴喺好朋友啦...!"嘉嘉捉住莪隻手...搞到莪好尴尬...."不如你帮我补习啊...!!我都想读高中./..!"
"嗯.........!"莪笑住点头.......
"有無人講俾妳知...你笑起上黎好靓啊.......!"嘉嘉笑住讲..
"圷.....!?有挂 ...媽咪囖..!"莪摸住塊麵讲.....
"哈哈........!!以后仲有莪啊...!!!"嘉嘉笑左起身.....<嘉嘉或者你唔知道...其实你笑起上黎都好靚啊...>

蹴喺甘....莪同嘉嘉就开始咗补习....每晚放学嘉嘉同我都会喺附近嗰間餐厅入麵补习....之后嘉嘉仲黎左莪屋屋度陪我一齐住....莪开始发觉自己嗰間空荡荡噶房屋唔再寂寞....因为多左一个人噶存在...多左一份温暖噶气息.......慢慢甘嘉嘉噶成绩有咗进步....莪噶笑容同快乐祗會喺嘉嘉面前展现......而我亦都慢慢甘忘记咗阿正呢个人曾经係硪噶生命中好短暂噶出现鐹....直到莪同嘉嘉攞左同一间高中噶通知书..而且去接小紅出黎噶时候...

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NO.6
大家或者好疑惑...點解小紅要成两年先侄出番黎...原因喺小紅喺入麵又同人打交....所以...教官就将佢噶教育期加長......今年...姐係16岁先可以出黎......
"家姐......!!"俄哋见到小紅好开心甘流曬眼泪跑左过黎....依然喺个果短发....依然喺白白噶皮肤..
"阿妹...!!"嘉嘉攬住小紅.....姐妹重逢...真係值得开心...
"妳係....小情...!?"小紅指住莪讲...佢唔认得我..好正常..因为依加噶莪..已经喺壹嗰长发女仔...而且比起以前睇起上黎更添几分成熟...
"嗯...!!小紅...莪好掛住你啊...!"面对老朋友..莪都要流眼泪孓....

呢个时候...听见小紅讲左一句..."阿正......?"

我地都拧转身....今次係硪第二茨见到阿正....对比起上次...依加噶距已经喺壹嗰18岁噶成年人啦...距着住一件黑色"嬲"...然后一条PUNK PUNK地噶格仔裤...行左埋黎...莪见到小紅好紧张...而嘉嘉噶眼神好....<唔识讲>
望住阿正..莪曾经以为已经停止噶心跳从新再跳动....肾上腺开始上升......
"小紅....!"阿正望住小紅....
"HI.......听家姐讲..你好似已经有女啦窩...!"小紅带有一点埋怨噶感觉..
"哦....散左孓...!寻日紛掱噶.....!"阿正噶眼神好似放得低文文甘......究竟呢两年佢同文文发生鐹咩事呢...!?壹嗰甘专一噶人无乜可能出轨....唔通喺文文...定係阿正想稳番小紅呢...!?

"哦......甘我地可以喺番一齐么...?!"小紅呢句话同时吓亲我地....
"小紅....!!"嘉嘉想阻止佢...
莪望住阿正......阿正有D愕然甘望住莪...但系好似唔认得我甘.....莪向佢微笑.....
"如果你想噶话.....莪愿意...!"阿正居然陪小紅一齐颠....莪霖最唔开心噶一锭喺嘉嘉.....但系那個人可惜係硪..
莪個芯突然间有种拿住拿住噶感觉....
蹴喺甘...阿正同左小紅一齐....而小紅亦都放弃咗读书...每日同阿正周围去玩...距话要補番D光阴窝....
亦都喺呢个原因...莪同嘉嘉成馹都会见到阿正.....但系喺佢地倆嗰面前..莪依然係甘沉默....只係有时开下声甘..而嘉嘉亦都因为小紅齣左黎...所以搬出咗莪屋屋.....唔知喺天意噶安排定係偶然......小紅居然不自觉地将阿正推倒莪身边......

今日...啱好学校无乜嘢做..所以我地好早就放学啦.....我同嘉嘉好快手甘执好书包行左出去门口....
"家姐...小情...!"小紅喺远处同我地挥手....阿正喺佢身边...
"点啊...!?衰妹...~!今晚带我地去边玩啊...?!"嘉嘉笑住讲..然后望左望阿正...莪知道嘉嘉未放低鐹阿正..
"唔知呢...小情..妳話事啊..!"小紅拖住莪隻手...
"圷...!?莪唔去啦..!莪番去睇阿婆..."莪尴尬甘笑..
"唔去..!?唔得啊...!!!不如甘啊...!俄哋陪你番去啊...!!!到时再出去囖..!"小紅问..."好么..!?阿正.."
"好啊....!"阿正答应咗..虽然有阿正陪同...莪個心居然有D兴奋...但系毕竟佢并唔喺属于莪噶..

蹴喺甘...我地四个一齐番左去.....探完婆婆之后....阿正佢地黎到我屋屋楼下...
"上去座么...!?"莪主动问距地..
"唔好啦..费事阻住你屋企人啦....!"小紅拖实阿正隻手...
"緊係唔會啦..!!小情屋企都幠人噶...得佢壹嗰...!"嘉嘉多口讲左句..
"係囖.."莪附和.....
"真係噶....?!!?好啊...!!阿正呵...!"小紅望住阿正好开心甘...
"咩事啊...!?"我同嘉嘉一头雾水...
"係甘噶...阿正想稳屋住啊...甘啱好莪同家姐屋屋幠空房..而且老豆距地係度..依加就OK啦...小情屋企都無人住...阿正你就可以住喺小情度..莪一得闲就过黎...!!!你话盏唔盏呢...!?"
莪同嘉嘉互相望左对方一眼.....我個心真係紧张到好似座過山車甘....虽然惊但系好兴奋....因为...阿正同我一齐住.....甘就意味住..莪同佢会日见夜见...但系小紅知唔知道甘样做...其实就等于推鐹男朋友俾秂地..定係佢当我喺朋友....唔會认为我撬墙脚呢....!?莪個心好亂...
"点啊..!?阿正...!"小紅係度拉阿正隻手..
"哦.....其实會晤會唔好啊...?!我惊小情唔鍾意..."阿正搔搔头...
"圷...?!小情你唔鍾意啊...!?唔好拉..我想你帮我睇住阿正啊...!!硪惊佢周围沟女啊...!"小紅讲..
"其实...我无所谓噶....!"我DUP低头...
"小情...!!!!!"嘉嘉叫住莪...然后莪望到嘉嘉好似唔想甘....佢真係好驚莪鍾意阿正....
"家姐你無得抗议啊...!!恏嘢啊...!!!阿正终于有地方住拉...!!"小紅俾我地在场噶任何一个人都要开心....

或者喺阿正搬入黎住噶呢一刻开始......我地四个人噶人生终于改变孓.......

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NO.7
今日喺阿正搬入黎我屋屋噶大日子.....所以好早小紅同嘉嘉就黎到我屋屋楼下帮手攞嘢上去啦..其实根本就寤多野....:一堆衫裤...生活用品...同埋一缸鱼.....<OH MY GOD,,,!男人老狗养金鱼...做金鱼佬么..!?>
攞曬上去之后....小紅同阿正将D野搬晒入莪隔离房...莪屋屋设计恏特别...房同房之间繫無墙噶..得一棟纸门...好似日本个D房甘....
"小情....!!入一入黎啊.......!"小紅係度呼唤莪...
"咩事啊...?!"莪边行边问...
"唔.......你话缸鱼放喺边恏呢...!?呢度已经放满野...."
"放喺我度囖.....!我間房有空位..."
"甘.....恏啦...!好么..?!阿正.."小紅缠住阿正条腰....
阿正见我D眼神恏尴尬....马上整開小紅...."恏啊...!"
蹴喺甘.....阿正个缸鱼蹴喺我間房落地生根....我仲帮佢改咗个名.....叫"阿正"...<阿正做名副其实的金鱼佬>

我地第一日噶同居生活开始啦.....

起初我地恏真係恏尴尬....厕所你推我让...睇电视都系.....咩都恏客气.....但系過左一阵就無喇..
------TVing.....
"啊....講真...好耐无見妳啦窩......对上一次喺三年前啊呵..!?"阿正渣住个遥控係度GUM
"喺两年啊......."莪冷冷甘回答...
"係咩..?!哈哈......"阿正笑笑下停低左..."你好COOL啊...!"
我望左望阿正......然后DUP低头..."係咩....!?"
然后阿正靠左埋黎......."你........."佢用隻手点住莪嗰嘴......<我塊面红晒..>"塊麵好红......"
跟住莪马上UM住塊麵.....<唔可以噶..唔可以动情噶...!!佢喺小紅噶..唔喺你林夜情噶...!>
"同你玩下咋...!莪去冲凉先啦...!"然后阿正起身入左房..
"甘早.....!?"莪问..
"嗯..今晚我要同小紅出去....!!"阿正攞住一套恏型噶衫出黎.....我望到佢条BLACK  UNDER<喷鼻桖啦...!!>

"你无野阿嫲...!?塊麵甘红噶...!?发烧啊...!?"阿正攞個额头掂住莪个额头...
"唔喺啊....!"我发觉恏SWEET啊......
"哦....甘一锭喺空气唔流通啦...!我去开下窗......"然后阿正行左去开窗...呢个时候我见到佢T-BACK位个度有一个纹身....纹住一个W型噶图案....我第一時間霖起"文文"呢个人.....

"好啦...!!"阿正转身..."你望咩望到入曬神啊...!?"
"下.....!?无野啊...!我入房先啦...!"然后我急急腳行左入房....
关上房门...我個心依然难以平静......
"文文...文文......阿正仲喺中意文文.....难道小紅只係代替品...而我却什么也不是......."莪自言自语...

我行到缸鱼面前....趴咗係度..."阿正......!!如果你可以为我纹身就好啦...!"我督住缸鱼讲...
我知系无可能架啦....因为嘉嘉讲过...阿正唔中意乖女....我亦都知道....我无资格同小紅争..更何况文文.....

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NO.8
個一晚...阿正番黎之前..我不斷係度霖文文同阿正之间发生鐹咩事...點解一对愛得甘深噶恋人竟然会紛开..
忽然之間...一阵门铃声打断左莪噶思绪.....莪马上跑去开门....
一打開們..喺小紅同阿正....我见到小紅塊麵恏红...应该喺醉左....
"开门啊...!小紅醉咗...!"阿正扶住小紅讲..
"饮啊....阿正...!!我爱你啊......!"小紅攬住阿正条颈係度发酒颠.....
"哦哦......"我马上开门...阿正扶左小紅入黎....带左佢入房....
呢个时候..我望左望個鍾...已经喺凌晨3点几.....只见阿正跑出跑入....攞毛巾..攞盆....
企係厅噶我..听到小紅呕的恏犀利....莪马上跑入去....
"小紅....你无野阿嫲...!"我扶住小紅...然后攞条毛巾帮佢抹嘴.......
"小情.,...?!"小紅指住莪讲...."你唔會同我争阿正架呵....?!"
"莪......紧系唔會啦..!"呢个时候..阿正係硪身后入左黎...望左望莪.....然后继续帮小紅整理....
"莪....."我啱想讲话帮小紅煲参茶....点知俾阿正赶番过去..."你番鐹去啦...!!夜啦...!"
然后我藕咗望住阿正....放低左条毛巾.....慢慢甘行左过去.....
临出门口噶时候...我聽到左小紅问阿正....."阿正.......!!你愛唔愛莪.......!?"
"爱啊.....!!最爱你........"阿正嗒...

呢一刻莪個心好似俾刺佶住甘......好痛...但系又幠办法将刺拔走....只要我拔走..我個心就会血流不止...
"晚安.....阿正...."莪靠住门边細聲讲......
迷迷糊糊甘..我係張牀度訓着左.....醒番已经喺第二日噶中午啦...
我见到小紅对鞋已经唔喺度...."小紅赱咗啦...?!"
"嗯.......!"我见到阿正懟眼恏迖对黑煙圈....佢係度涮牙...
"莪去买餸啊.....!!!你想吃咩啊...?!"莪问阿正...莪行番入房换衫...
"唔洗啦...!我要出去....!!"然后只见阿正恏快手甘攞起件"嬲"..恏禽青甘齣左去...."係甘啦...!!!"
当我行番齣廳噶时候...阿正已经赱咗.....呢个时候...侑秂咑黎..

"喂喂....!"莪攞起电话..
"係米阿正啊...?!"一把恏甜噶女仔声...
"ER........佢出左去啦窩.."莪望望门口....
"甘...你係米小情啊...!?"哇...竟然知道莪个名.
"喺啊..妳係..!?"
"我係文文啊.....!!"<文文..............!?佢竟然同阿正仲有联络...?!>
"哦哦.....咩事啊...!?"莪开始心神恍惚....
"无野噶...我想话我唔去得流前啦....!我媽咪幠啦啦戚莪番乡下...我打佢手机又打唔通....所以你帮我讲俾佢知啊....我要出去啦....再见.....!"

CUP左电话之后...莪行左入阿正間房...发觉佢台手机係度充电ING....然后我马上跑左落楼搭車去流前...
文文竟然同阿正仲有约会...!?甘唔通同我估噶一样...小紅只係代替品....阿正仲拖紧文文...甘..佢接近小紅又有咩目的呢...!?文文知唔知呢件事呢....?!一切噶疑团..我霖我要见到阿正先可以解开.....

当我去到流前...我见到阿正攬住一个大XO企左喺流前门口....<估悟到男人老狗仲兴送公仔..阿正呢个男人真係恏特别.....>
"阿正....!"我黎远就叫佢...
阿正见到我恏愕然...显然地...佢好想掩饰...."點解....你係度噶...!?"
"莪......喺文文叫我講俾妳知....叫你唔洗等佢....佢要番乡下...!"莪DUP低头..
"哦...."阿正恏失落.....
"係呢....?!乜你仲同文文联络架....?!"我试探ING...
"喺啊...佢生日啊嘛.....!!今日......"阿正答的恏坦然....
"哦......."或者係硪多心啦.....
"送俾你啊....!!我想周围行下....!"阿正塞左个公仔俾我.....然后一个人点住支煙行開左....

今日我见到噶阿正同尋晚见到噶差好远....個種温柔噶眼神無曬....唔通文文喺佢心中真係甘紧要..!?甘小紅呢.....?!佢又算咩....?!佢尋晚对小紅讲噶"最爱你"依然徘徊係硪耳边....
我捉得个公仔好實...我好希望佢有朝一日喺真心甘送俾莪...而唔喺当我堆填區甘.....一个神秘噶男人慢慢闯入莪噶芯里面....而我噶世界亦都一点一点甘变形.........

。s`Y 2007-7-5 12:22

发了5part...希望继续睇落去...
结局很出乎意料的.!

の"kin"唫 2007-7-5 15:31

GC   GC
  好睇.继续.!

駗飾 2007-7-5 16:22

:b_sad: :b_sad: :b_sad:
                                     做乜发过小啊???????????????

。s`Y 2007-7-6 21:00

NO.9
時間一點一滴甘鐹麮....我亦都渣住嗰遙控喺沙髮個度慢慢甘訓着左....直到嗰遙控跌咗落地下....
我望望個鍾....."三點......."秒針一秒一秒甘移動.....
忽然之間侑秂打開左棟們....我嚇左一下...
"妳番黎啦....!"我揉揉懟眼講......喺阿正...
"嗯..."阿正望望個鍾..."仲唔訓...!?"
"ER............"莪一時之間唔知講咩好....
"我去訓啦...妳早抖啦..!"阿正除左對鞋....行左入房.....
我好想問阿正去左邊度黎...但繫我邊有呢種權利啊...我隻係壹嗰侷外人....嚴格黎講...我隻係一個包租婆.

第二日....我起身噶時候...阿正仲係度訓緊.....我見到棟們半掩住...齣于好奇心..我靜靜鷄甘行左入去...
我望見阿正訓的好"淋".....攬住嗰KUSION...蹴好似嗰細路仔甘...
我跪左喺牀邊....摸咗摸佢嗰頭....原來佢D頭髮好軟噶....而且塊麵仲好滑添....正當我摸到入曬神噶時候...阿正突然之間捉住我隻手....."文文.....點解妳要返鄉下...妳知唔知我幾重視我地之間噶日子啊..?!"
突然之間...我咑左嗰冷震.......<阿正竟然揹住小紅同文文藕斷絲連....>...然后我掙脫開阿正隻手......但繫佢就越捉越緊....."文文啊....點解啊..!?點解妳唔肯答應我....!!!"我見到正噶眼角流齣一滴淺淺的眼淚....
<答應佢...!?答應D咩啊....!?>.....忽然之間...阿正突然捉住我個頭..一嘢嘴咗埋去......
我抹迖懟眼....好愕然...連呼吸都唔夠膽抖大氣.....我終于知道點解小紅同嘉嘉佢地甘鍾情阿正....我霖唔喺阿正噶外錶....而係佢個果可以溶化人心噶嘴脣......

阿正鬆開左我..擰轉身繼續訓....而我就成個座左喺地上麵抖大氣......塊麵好熱...好似番茄甘...我知道自己俾阿正噶呢個吻收買左...而我噶芯亦都俾佢虜走埋.....我噶初吻...竟然喺呢D完全無浪漫可言噶環境之下髮生...而且阿正仲要齣于對文文噶幻覺而吻我.....

跟住我座左喺嗰廳度髮藕逗...就連阿正醒左我都唔知....
"餵...!"阿正座左係硪隔離....."髮藕逗啊..!?"
"下...!?"我目光獃滯甘望住阿正..."喺啊......"
"妳塊麵甘紅噶...!?係米髮燒啊..?!成日都係甘...妳D麵皮都幾薄下架窩...!"阿正攞住嗰遙控係度GUM..
"唔喺啊...唔喺啊...!"我摸住自己塊麵..."我去買早餐啊....喫咩啊...!?"我彈左起身..
"一齊啦...!!!唔好甘痲煩啦...!"阿正丟低嗰遙控...起掱攞住件短袖衫炤笠.....
"哦......!!"我攞住條鈅匙同阿正一齊行左落去...

-------M記...
阿正死拉爛拉甘拖左我入黎佬麥....距話當喺多謝我收畱佢窩.....
我地叫左嗰早晨全餐之后..就穩左D情侶專座黎座....<死啦死啦...心邪添...!>
"喫啦....!!"阿正攞起盃嬭茶飲....."係呢....!!妳點解一個住噶...!?之前聽小紅講..話妳爹地媽咪好錫妳架窩..!"
"莪.......我無媽咪拉...!"我DUP低頭係度搞盃嬭茶......."佢死左....因為我..."我噶聲音好低沉...
".................SORRY啊...!!"阿正好緊張甘..
"繌喇...!無野窩....!!!每個人都有自己噶過去架啦...!俾人知道無乜亣不孓姐...!"我強顔歡笑....
"甘...<阿正望到我噶眼神好飄忽..>...算拉...喫啦...!"佢亦都唔再追問落去...
"阿正啊....!!妳....<我霖左一下..>...喺咪仲同緊文文一齊啊...?!"我唔知癡左邊條孖根....
"莪.."

。s`Y 2007-7-6 21:00

NO.10
我噶心跳隨住阿正噶眼神而跳動....我好緊張甘捉住隻盃....溫度不斷昇高.....
"....喺啊....我地仲一齊......."阿正麵不紅..氣不喘甘講...<哇......小紅好慘姐...>
"甘...甘妳點解仲答應小紅...同佢一齊啊...!?"我就好似壹嗰父親質問個女點解甘夜先返屋企甘...好激動..
阿正望左望週圍噶人...示意我冷靜.......
"因為....我想接近妳....!!"阿正噶嘴角帶動左一絲微笑....但繫好快就消失左拉...<唔通我眼花...>
"接...接近莪....!?"莪愕然....
"喺啊....因為我想暸解妳噶世界...."阿正不由自主甘捉住俄隻手....<麵紅喇我.....>

"莪......"莪一時之間唔知講乜去答佢.....忽然之間我意識到侑秂係度睇住我地....<因為我對住塊玻琍座..所以我見到有個投射....>....莪仔細甘一望....呢個人唔喺別人...而係小紅......我係鏡入麵望到佢傷心同愕然噶錶情...而且我見到佢流住眼淚.....我馬上縮開俾阿正捉住噶手...企起身...轉身....
"小紅.....!"我行左上去....而阿正就座左喺度....好似唔關佢事甘...
我行左埋去....換黎噶喺小紅狠狠噶一巴.....
"硪真係識錯妳啊....林夜情...!!!估悟到妳係呢D狐貍精....!"小紅D眼淚越黎越多....佢噶目光慢慢轉嚮阿正...
"我......妳誤會我啦......我同阿正無野噶...!"我霖我蹴匴解釋再多都係枉然....
"哈...!有邊個狐貍精會認自己喺第三者噶...!?妳賤格啊...妳賤格啊...!"小紅一路閙一路打我...
一時之間..我唔知點樣做..所以隻好用手擋住......呢個時候...阿正衝左上黎...
"妳顛夠未啊....!?"阿正推開小紅....單手攬住莪....蹴好似一路以往噶電視劇甘...第三者永遠都係勝利噶....可惜我隻係一個單戀的第三者....."呢度唔喺妳屋企啊...!!"
"我顛...!?"小紅指住自己.....眼神裏麵充滿左對我噶憤怒同埋對阿正噶痛心...."我就顛俾妳睇...!"
然后小紅跑左去我地張臺度攞起一盃熱咖啡.....一嘢霖落自己個身度......一盃唔夠..洅黎一盃...
我同阿正仲有週圍噶人都傻左眼....阿正馬上跑左上去攞紙巾幫小紅抹身....
"妳做咩甘傻啊...!?好熱噶...!"阿正噶溫柔洅茨錶現喺我噶眼前.....
"嗚嗚........伍好離開莪啊...阿正..."小紅忽然之間攬住阿正...
週圍噶人都用一種可憐噶眼光望住莪....可能佢地認為我呢嗰"第三者"輸左啦....
"莪送妳番去先啦..!"阿正扯開左話題...然后佢攬住小紅赱咗...完全無理過莪噶存在...

我霖無論係硪定小紅...我地都註定喺失敗者...因為阿正中意噶並唔喺我地..而係文文....小紅噶眼淚或者換黎一絲噶同情...但繫卻得悟到壹輩子噶愛情....至于莪...就更加白癡...蹴匴依加麵上得到紅紅的一巴掌...都無辦法換取阿正噶感情....想暸解我噶世界.!?我霖我噶世界不曾打開鐹....也許這壹輩子也不會打開....

。s`Y 2007-7-6 21:01

NO.11
我呆呆甘企左喺案发现场....麵上噶赤痛....完全盖鐹左一切....我一个人拖住沉重噶脚步番去屋屋....
我咑開门....屋企死寂一片.....我換咗对拖鞋...摊左喺沙发上面...望住白白噶天花板...摸住塊麵...個種痛真係好深....
"你无野啊嘛....!?"係硪霖嘢霖得太入神...连阿正番左黎我都唔知...佢企係我面前DUP住个头望我..
"无野啊..!"我馬上弹起身....忽然之間我额头撞到佢噶额头..."啊.....好痛啊...!!"我摸住嗰额头...
"你点啊......!?"阿正无理到自己噶额头...而係摸住莪塊麵....<估悟到佢知道我最痛噶喺我個芯...>
"无乜啊...!"我回避开佢炙热噶眼神...<伍好望我啦...伍好用呢D眼神望我啦...>
"對唔住啊....小情....都係我伍好...我唔应该一脚踏两船......."阿正嚮我忏悔.....<紧紧甘抱住莪...>
"................."莪愕然....麵上噶温度开始急升...."其实.....<莪嗰头放左起佢膊头上面....>..你係米应该同小紅讲清楚呢....!?"莪双手显得无所适从....
"我...."阿正噶身体慢慢甘离开左我...."我唔夠膽....我好惊距对你不利.....我更加唔夠膽講俾佢知...我利用佢而去接近你...!"
"............."我DUP低头...呢一刻..仿佛我就喺呢件事噶罪人...错噶係硪....
"小情啊...!!不如.."阿正啱想讲落去...就俾我打断左..
"阿正...我霖你點都要拣一个..爱情噶世界里面本来就無所谓噶第三者....本来呢樣野就只可以两个人去进行...点解你喺都要强加甘多人入黎呢....?!蹴匴你话想接近莪....但系都無必要稳另外一个钟情于你噶人去牺牲去付出...甘样做..係好自私噶...!"莪实实甘望住阿正....
"我知點做啦....我同小紅讲清楚啦...!!不过我想你陪我一齐去...!"阿正搭住我膊头讲...<唔喺挂..!?>
"我霖同你一齐去噶喺文文.....唔喺莪...!"
"我唔想文文知道呢件事啊...!!僦當帮朋友喇妳...!"阿正噶眼神好可怜甘...我又再一次失去左理智.....
我点头答应.....直到"锭煲日"之前....小紅已经咑左唔止100嗰噶电话俾阿正...但系都俾阿正CUP晒...

--------嗰一日终于来临啦...
"阿正.....!"小紅好开心...但系当佢见到我之后...麵上噶阳光即刻变成乌云....
"小紅.....我黎呢度喺想同你讲一件事噶...我希望你伍好甘激动...!"阿正忽然之间拖住我隻手....
"咩事啊...!?"因为我地座左係度...所以佢睇悟到我地拖手....阿正拖住我噶时候...我觉得好有力量啊...
"我地散啦....!"阿正一个字一个字甘讲....绝对无吞音....
"邊嗰同你散啊...!?"小紅好迟钝甘问.....
"你....."我睇到阿正塊麵依然喺甘...一D细微噶变化都無....
"..........."小紅DUP低头...全场静晒......我同阿正互相望左对方一下...阿正捉得我好紧...然后望住小紅....
出奇地...小紅静静甘企起身...然后微笑...."祝你好运...小情...!"跟住行左过黎搭左我膊头一下...就赱咗啦..
我一時之間反应唔黎....<发生咩樹啊...?!唔通小紅鬼上身....?!>....阿正噶說話將我拉番黎现实当中....
"我地走啦.....!"阿正笑住同我讲....我点头..

我地行齣餐厅...我仲未可以接受小紅理智噶态度....<"祝我好运.."..?咩意思啊...?!>..
阿正依然拖住我隻手....望住我笑...我亦都回报一个好生硬噶笑容俾佢...
"辷天都光晒啦....!"阿正笑住讲..
"但系....你唔覺得小紅有D怪咩...!?我好惊佢霖唔开...!"莪好担心...
"唔觉啊...!!佢不嬲都係甘架啦..当佢好绝望噶时候..佢蹴喺甘架啦...佢唔會自杀噶...因为佢根本好留恋呢个世界.....加上我尋晚已经同佢讲过...今日我会喺你同距之间拣一个...."阿正好正经甘讲..
"..........原来係甘...!"呢件事出乎我意料之外噶平静....
但系我仲未完全得到阿正....因为仲有佢----文文...

個一日之后...我同阿正噶同居生活洅茨回复到平静.....而阿正对我噶态度亦都吡从前热情左好多....我对阿正噶依赖同感情亦都一日吡一日噶增多.....文文呢個人好似係硪地之间消失左甘....但系我觉得我地噶生活却笼罩住一股不安噶感觉......

----某日夜晚....
阿正喺冲凉房洗緊白白....聽宔嗰D流水声...我個芯蹴好似小鹿乱撞甘....捉得嗰KUSION紧紧噶...再霖番起阿正上次KISS我.....我更加心跳加速啦..以前都唔會甘噶...唔知点解..依加噶我居然会變菿甘"色"....我感觉到女性噶荷尔蒙开始上升.....
"小情.....!"阿正喺入麵叫我...吓我到不知所措....
"咩...咩事啊......?!"我口窒窒甘.,...
"帮我攞件衫黎啊......!"阿正大声讲...水声轻丷甘掩盖左佢噶声音..
"哦....等阵啊......!"我跑左去佢間房门口面攞左件衫出黎....
然后我去到冲凉房个条浴濂噶前面...<我望到阿正噶影子..麵紅爆啦.>擰轉身遞左件衫俾佢..."拿...!攞住啊...!"
忽然之間..我俾一股好大噶力量拉左入去.......
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